雅思观点类大作文，学会“杠”得优雅，分数暴涨！

烤鸭们，是否每次看到“To what extent do you agree or disagree?”就开始发懵，洋洋洒洒写完后却总觉得像在写日记？今天老师教你用「学术抬杠法」稳拿高分！

暴言真相：遇到观点类大作文，烤鸭们只需要同意或否认题干观点即可。但同意不等于全盘接受，反对不等于无脑开喷。观点类作文的精髓是——用逻辑打架，用证据甩脸。

第一步：破题三连问，审题快准狠

一问题目在问谁？政府、企业、个人还是环境？对象不同，论点不同。二问我的立场够坚定吗？尽量别选“两边倒”，很容易两边都没写好。三问能想到2+1个论点吗？即2个主论点加1个预判反驳。

第二步：高分结构——5段式黄金模板

段1

对方观点看似合理，加上“However”，我反对或有条件同意。例如：“提高机票价格能环保？且慢！这波操作伤经济、毁文化、阻科技！”

段2

主论点1加论证，扣题关键词（例如“经济”）加上讲道理或精简例子，逻辑为“机票贵→游客少→旅游业崩盘→失业率飙升”。

段3

主论点2加例证，换维度（例如“文化”）加上详细例子（数据、名人、历史）。

段4

灵魂反驳段，预判对手观点并优雅怼回去，例如“有人杠：环保不重要吗？重要！但牺牲经济换环保是本末倒置”。

段5

结尾段，重申立场并升华格局。

第三步：分析类写作高分范文

上文已经详细告诉大家分析类大作文如何审题并分段书写，下面来看看示范题目怎么写才出彩。题目：“Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from travelling by air. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.”

开头段：陈述反方观点，明确我方表态

“Frequent air traveling does contribute to air pollution, such as the emission of carbon dioxide, which misleads some to claim that air fares should be raised for a sustainable environment. However, in terms of economy, culture and technology, I disapprove of such view.”

主体段1：主论点加论证

“Compared with pricey plane tickets, cheaper ones are more conducive to the economy. To be more specific, a lower fee means higher affordability, thus tempting a greater number people to travel by air to a wide range of destinations both home and abroad. In this case, more revenue could be generated for airline companies, boosting the aviation industry. Furthermore, tourism and hospitality industries could also prosper as travellers need to pay for their accommodation, food and beverage, entrance fees to tourist attractions and the like. It is worth mentioning that a variety of positions could be created to meet the surging demand of business, making a difference to the local employment rate and the local economy as a whole.”

主体段2：主论点加例证

“Besides, cheaper air travel also facilitates cultural exchanges as it offers a greater population the access to a myriad of destinations in every corner of the world. In other words, it encourages people to explore and even participate in local culture and customs. For example, lowering international air fares could enable more people to visit other continents, immersing themselves in the local traditions and gaining an international exposure. Likewise, it could also welcome more overseas travellers to visit China and experience our lifestyles, which helps to showcase our hospitality and eliminate the stereotype or opinion or even deep-rooted bias against us. Thus, people-to-people exchanges could be enhanced with a reduction in the airfare, benefiting all nations involved.”

第四段：反驳段——让步加扳回来

“A voice arises that the emissions and noise produced by airplanes expedite global warming, posing a threat to the environment. Thus, it is advisable to discourage people from taking planes with a high charge. Ironically, with the cutting-edge technology, clean energy sources such as hydrogen and solar power could be utilized to make the fuel more ecologically-friendly. By contrast, raising airfare is by no means a desirable approach since it does not address the root cause.”

结尾段：总结全文，呼应首段

“To sum up, as far as economy, culture and technology are concerned, I hold that more affordable air travel should be encouraged.”

三大致命雷区

例子假大空——改命方案是把“很多国家经济受影响”换成具体国家；反驳段变舔狗——正确姿势是“Irrefutably…（承认对方合理点），However…（指出致命漏洞）”；立场反复横跳——记住开头亮剑后全文别背叛。