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结论:很多烤鸭以为Task 1只要把数字报一遍就行,结果分数卡在6上不去。
很多烤鸭以为Task 1只要把数字报一遍就行,结果分数卡在6上不去。Task 1的核心不是“报数”,而是“总结趋势+突出特征+对比差异”。考官看的不是你写了多少数据,而是你有没有抓住最重要的变化和对比。
PART-01 动态图(趋势描述三件套)
结构为:①总体趋势——“Overall, [主语] experienced a [adj.] trend over the period.” ②具体变化——“[Time] saw/witnessed a [adj.] [increase/decrease/fluctuation] in [data].” ③峰值或谷值——“The figure reached a peak/trough of [数值] in [年份].”
基础版:“The number of mobile phone users went up from 50 million to 90 million between 2010 and 2020. It increased slowly at first, then quickly after 2015.”
升级版:“Overall, mobile phone subscriptions experienced a dramatic upward trajectory, climbing from 50 million to 90 million over the decade. The period witnessed a moderate rise before 2015, followed by a sharp acceleration, with the figure peaking at 92 million in 2019 before a slight dip.”——升级版用了“experienced a dramatic upward trajectory”(比went up高级十倍)、“witnessed”(拟人化主语)、“followed by”(衔接前后变化)、“peaking”(分词结构精确描述顶点)。不再只是“上升”,而是有阶段、有节奏地描述趋势。
PART-02 静态图(比较与排序句)
结构为:①最大或最小——“[Category] accounted for the largest proportion / was the dominant category at [数值].” ②对比——“By contrast, [Category] represented only [数值], making it the least significant.” ③倍数关系——“The figure for [A] was roughly [倍数] times that of [B].”
基础版:“Coal made up 40%, natural gas 25%, nuclear 20%, and others 15%. Coal was the biggest.”
升级版:“Coal dominated the energy mix, accounting for 40% of total consumption. Natural gas followed closely behind at 25%, while nuclear energy represented a fifth. By contrast, renewables and other sources collectively contributed only 15%, making them the smallest category.”——升级版用了dominated、accounting for、followed closely behind、represented、by contrast、collectively contributed、making them等一系列多样表达,避免了重复“占百分比”,还用了非谓语结构“making them”来补充说明结果。
PART-03 地图题(方位变化与设施增减)
结构为:①新增——“A [new facility] was constructed / added in the [location], replacing the previous [old feature].” ②移除——“The [old feature] was demolished / removed to make way for [new].” ③扩建或缩小——“[Area] was expanded / extended / reduced in size.” ④相对位置——“Situated to the north of [A], [B] remained unchanged.”
基础版:“In 2000 there was a forest in the east. By 2020, houses had been built there. Also, a hospital appeared in the south.”
升级版:“The woodland in the eastern part of the town was completely cleared to make way for a residential area. Meanwhile, a new hospital was erected in the southern corner, adjacent to the main road. The central commercial district remained largely intact, though the car park was extended westward.”——升级版使用了被动语态(was cleared / was erected / was extended)来描述人为变化,非常符合地图题客观描述的要求,还加入了方位词(adjacent to)和保留不变的表述(remained largely intact),体现全面观察。
小贴士
Overview必须写,在第一段或第二段用Overall总结主要趋势或最显著特征,这是TR评分的命门。数据不要全报,挑最大值、最小值、显著变化点和对比反差大的数据,其余一笔带过或忽略。动态图用时间段作主语(“The decade witnessed...”比“There was an increase...”更生动)。静态图多用比例词,accounted for / constituted / represented / made up轮换用。地图和流程图多用被动语态,描述客观变化或工序时被动语态比主动更合适。字数控制在150-180,不要超200,否则挤占大作文时间。